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Frenchtoastgirl
2015-10-31 13:36:54
Lucy decides that this may not be the most effective way to tell her story. If she wants to create more suspense in the plot, what would be the best possible change she could make? She could remove the background information about her past with Grandma June, allowing suspense to build as the reader wonders who Grandma June is. She could include more reasons she is hesitant to assist Grandma June, allowing suspense to build as the reader begins to believe she will not help. She could start with the last sentence instead, allowing suspense to build as the reader wonders why she is hesitant to ask if Grandma June needs help. She could begin with more stories about Grandma June, allowing suspense to build as the reader wonders why she is talking about Grandma June.
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BIGMONEYHARRISON
2015-10-31 16:47:05

i really dont know sorry but i cant help you right now let my try to research a bit

Rendy
2015-10-31 16:48:20

She could start with the last sentence instead, allowing suspense to build as the reader wonders why she is hesitant to ask if Grandma June needs help.

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